Thursday 24 March 2016

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*Slurp* Im here sipping this chilled drink on this beach the sand is as hot as lava. Im looking out at the clear teal blue water it’s refreshing under these palm trees. I am putting my feet in this  sulfur like water it’s so good to put my head under the water it’s like being in a sulfur pool at the top of a mountain on a cold winter day. It’s time to get some lunch im eating a big container of ice cream and then suddenly it gets cold like ice I see a waterspout heading my way so i start to run it comes onto the shore and im getting  pulled into it I guess this what paradise is like in my dreams.

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