Wednesday 23 March 2016

Creative Writing

WALT: Write a piece of descriptive writing.
Success Criteria

WALT: Try make the reader feel like they are curious cove we chose something interesting to write about from Curious Cove. Here's my piece of writing, hope you enjoy.





As we feel the adrenaline pumping in our veins begging to stop walking up mount kahikatea. I hate the crunching sound of the leaves and the buzzing of the wasps Im trying to keep up with Byron but my legs feel like they are cracking. 400 METERS TO GO the sweet sound of 400 meters is like ice cream but it’s in my head as I try look for a Sasquatch in the bush I yell in my head SASQUATCH but then I realize it was a tree. 200 meters I feel like my legs are playdoh or gelatin. Im trying not to run back down Im tempted too because I can’t take no more it’s like a grenade about to blow up and a different kind of pain. We are here yay finally 640 meters above sea level time for photos. Okay time to head back down as my feet feel like they are rock hard Im ready 5 mins later im  tired. How are we meant to get down this it’s so fast it’s like a Lamborghini and  a Bugatti veyron combined ahh wait we are here yay i'd say that's job well done.

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