Descriptive piece

     

*Slurp* Im here sipping this chilled drink on this beach the sand is as hot as lava. Im looking out at the clear teal blue water it’s refreshing under these palm trees. I am putting my feet in this  sulfur like water it’s so good to put my head under the water it’s like being in a sulfur pool at the top of a mountain on a cold winter day. It’s time to get some lunch im eating a big container of ice cream and then suddenly it gets cold like ice I see a waterspout heading my way so i start to run it comes onto the shore and im getting  pulled into it I guess this what paradise is like in my dreams.

Creative Writing

WALT: Write a piece of descriptive writing.
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As we feel the adrenaline pumping in our veins begging to stop walking up mount kahikatea. I hate the crunching sound of the leaves and the buzzing of the wasps Im trying to keep up with Byron but my legs feel like they are cracking. 400 METERS TO GO the sweet sound of 400 meters is like ice cream but it’s in my head as I try look for a Sasquatch in the bush I yell in my head SASQUATCH but then I realize it was a tree. 200 meters I feel like my legs are playdoh or gelatin. Im trying not to run back down Im tempted too because I can’t take no more it’s like a grenade about to blow up and a different kind of pain. We are here yay finally 640 meters above sea level time for photos. Okay time to head back down as my feet feel like they are rock hard Im ready 5 mins later im  tired. How are we meant to get down this it’s so fast it’s like a Lamborghini and  a Bugatti veyron combined ahh wait we are here yay i'd say that's job well done.